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~haiku~ (Haiku) by Entelechist

The sky weeps with rain brimfulls of liquid sadness A tear drop drowns the world

Entelechist 9-Dec-03/1:23 AM
Hi Richa,
Thanks for making a comment on this Haiku. I agree with you that a haiku has to be self-explanatory to work, so I won't try and explain the last line. Glad you got some inkling of the sentiments behind it.
Happy scribbling.




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