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Grind (Free verse) by INTRANSIT

I dug a hole and buried myself. I took everything I had and put it underground to decay, and welcomed the invisible world. A world of the unseen vitamin, where thoughts become the granules of life. Where dirt is edible and tastes like the sun. Where moisture rinses the nerve-bones back to conciousness. This fathom My fathom underneath a garden of park-weed, meant to mesh with the grind-stone until I am a solid part of the broken earth. See my epitaph it has not been written.

SupremeDreamer 25-Nov-03/2:02 PM
Ofcourse it is! with imagination? its up to the minds delight.
Sadly though, not many will actually go through the trouble to unravel a poem- its amazing how many people get turned off when they might need to jolt up the noggen.

In the end though, I feel a poem that has room for movement and is flexible in meaning and thought lives longer: theres room for it to evolve on its own.





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