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untitled (suggestions wanted) (Free verse) by Don-Quixote

I. In youth we whimper, fearing the night owl; turn pubescent and roar. Subdued we still growl, having learned the lore; seek silence to then wither. II. Each separate life is part of an ageless symphony; we transpose and form the glissando. Melodic when united, alone a sharp cacophony; born like thunder and then diminuendo.

The_Third_Isis 24-Nov-03/10:01 PM
How about Sancho Panzas puberty... for the untitled heh,heh.Don I'am encantada que leiste mi poema, si es verdad sobre el tema 8 que lo de la harmonica quizas le falta practica, pero es uno de mis bebe's.And has alot of potential please, you are invited to continue giving me tips and bettering my poetry. how about the sonnata of the windmills..Thank you.Ciao bello!.




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