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Something I Hope I Would Not Hear Myself Speak (Free verse) by Lifeboatman

The bitches of our time are as plentiful As the flying pigs of antiquity And with as much decency too Though their nest-sties had changed To haystacks, then to cabarets And then to bust seats and pool tables, They still copulate to make extreme their countenances And don their promiscuity without shame

SupremeDreamer 14-Nov-03/2:30 AM
long time, no see- ive missed your works, and enjoyed this one- even though its pencrap to you.

bust seats- slightly confusing, but i understand what you mean, i hope: empty seats? (bust- adj, lacking funds?)

well anyway, heres an 8.




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