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Something I Hope I Would Not Hear Myself Speak (Free verse) by Lifeboatman

The bitches of our time are as plentiful As the flying pigs of antiquity And with as much decency too Though their nest-sties had changed To haystacks, then to cabarets And then to bust seats and pool tables, They still copulate to make extreme their countenances And don their promiscuity without shame

Lifeboatman 13-Nov-03/6:31 PM
thanks.. but I think this poem really doesn't have to be perfected as I think of it as a crock of shit... and for bust seats, it was intentional but I also don't know what they are, sounded great, though, while I was writing the piece...




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