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paint me a poem with pictures (Lyric) by nentwined

Picture me a poem with the paint of a mind, give me a beauty that will last throughout time, rhyme me a reason to forestall all doubt, dribble me words to sustain me through drought.

richa 11-Nov-03/8:06 AM
I think the syllable sounds of a word are more important than syllables per line. That is why the flow of different haikus can be so variable.

The only problem I see here is forestall (the same as stall?) it seems to stop my reading dead.




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