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an early discovery (reworking)
(
Free verse
) by
richa
Kept tidy with cutting the row of spruce to the fence, a night crept around it. And like the nights impinging darkness I, grew over twenty years so high to look over and down the embankment at the weather worn willow an infant in mind.
http://mulberryfairy
9-Nov-03/10:47 AM
Interesting twist to identify with the upright tree instead of the willow (especially in the willow's weather worn-ness), which most poets would probably prefer.
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