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take me back home again: (Free verse) by Sapphire

sun lightly kisses tops of trees mountains sing of ageless loves dance on river, over the slumbering stones touch me tender wind of morn take me in and wrap your embrace about me keep me in the cradle of home set me on the hearth of divinity warm my heart

nentwined 16-Mar-02/1:21 AM
again a tumble of images -- I'm not finding a pause for breath, though I'm getting a better understanding. One thing you do is leave of a bunch of articles where I expect them, though there are some there. That makes for some of the stumbling. I'm starting to like it more.




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