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Toku (Free verse) by Bill Z Bub

NATURE! Toku shouts NATURE! in the midst, in the center surrounded, hands high, as others grip the slick rails and turn amused eyes, He laughs HA! NATURE! and the Thunderbeings laugh back! NATURE! in the mist tasting NATURE! on fingers and cheeks, soaking NATURE! in clothing and hair, Toku laughs HA! and the Maiden smiles back.

<~> 22-Oct-03/12:41 AM
i was not disagreeing with you about your critique of the poem.

i was merely noting that you were cranky tonight,.




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