Replying to a comment on:

Drug Addict (Free verse) by SupremeDreamer

empty have been my dreams like hollow stones whispers and fading winds all that i hear now, i fear. ghost visions and shadows haunt the walls, in this old room. seems like years ago, when i would break the window and run away. the morning dreams have come again along with the insomnia, my reality warps once more. its warm in this time capsul and lonely, the pipe warm the smoke curling slow before the morning rays. a lovely coffin.

Shuushin 20-Oct-03/1:10 PM
"rotting time"
"hollow stone"
"eternal view"
"insomniatic dreams"

I could do with one less "warm" in the last stanza.




Track and Plan your submissions ; Read some Comics ; Get Paid for your Poetry
PoemRanker Copyright © 2001 - 2024 - kaolin fire - All Rights Reserved
All poems Copyright © their respective authors
An internet tradition since June 9, 2001