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Untitled (Free verse) by Piano

you'll still be in my memory when my memory is long gone when everything is gone and the world has moved on you'll be there and I'll still be dancing with the dandelions I'll always be there take your time lay on the grass and look at the stars 'cause I'm up there I'll be the one you see the pale star I'll twinkle and say hello I sure can and I'll be the one you see the cold and twinkling star

Artemis745 11-Oct-03/3:09 PM
Each stanza needs to have more of a flow to the next.




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