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BlackBird (Howl and Flatulence) (Free verse) by DreamerSupreme

Pissivity- your insistent on infecting me with it, but I only see another challenge to unravel. Now I'm determined to snap and start swinging- because I can. why? quick to utter dunce? I dance to the tune alot. why? sapphic - look, isnt that -kewl-? Opprobrium!- give me more of it. BlackBird you must be the child that grew up stepping on loose carpet strands Me? I set them on fire along with pillows since I'm not one to smother a man when he sleeps. Persistence and pressure with them toes, how clever. Dub me the brute who strikes with the side of fist. I am stubborn- thank my mother. Chuckle- and I have everything stored to review because I am also the silent observer. Squall- cackle and speak of angst, enjoy the twinkle in my eye that is not cursed with stigmatism. Tapestries fray- I'm quite good at making chokes with string. No threat- no promise, but silly ranting that changes constantly. haven't you noticed? Denial and Imply a thousand alternate views record and present my star report when you feel like backing up your empty chirpings. Good day, "And may you live long and prosper" OK? [Do you think theres enough feathers to make an indian chieftan hat?] =give me your zeros folks, i got eternity to spread=

SupremeDreamer 8-Oct-03/1:00 AM
Ok. Shall do that.




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