Shuushin7 Oct 2003

I has a very sweet cadence, one that rings true; a lovely flow.

There are a couple "too easy" references though, which would be nice if tweeked out ("like a summers breeze", "like cool showers in the spring") - and I think "sweet" wants to be an adverb. "flowers in the Fall" is pretty good as describing a torture.

It's a good, honest expression of love - though I haven't fallen in love with it (I'm happy to have it as a good friend).