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I Hate You (Free verse) by mytenderrage

I despise you. You took my heart, And ripped it in to shreds. Until there was nothing left. I detest you. You stabbed my chest Until my blood flowed out Into a puddle of crimson Beneath my aching figure. Until there was a hole Of emptiness within My abused body, Helpless and hopeless, Cold and dead. You had offered me warmth, But I was so na??ve. I believed you. I wanted you. I did not anticipate All this pain All this hurt. You went away With hardly a farewell. How dare you go And leave me all alone? I am so lonely, I need someone. I hate you, I hate you. You hurt me the most When you didn???t mean to. I hate you, I hate you. You left my life forever, With barely a farewell. I hate you, I hate you. I hate you because I love you.

kazeaki 30-Jul-02/9:36 PM
Ok, first of all, -=Dark_Angel=- isn't really a very L33T name. Second, what do you think you're accomplishing by telling her that her poem is crap? You're just making someone feel bad. Why don't you be mature and try to help her instead of just telling her that her writings not worth shit and she's a whore? From what I've read of these comments, you seem like a big prick to me. That's an understandable conclusion. Her poem doesn't make her seem like a whore. Why don't you grow up?




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