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Trapped Rat
(
Free verse
) by
SupremeDreamer
life is a labyrinth and i am the mazed rat that thinks he can not walk through walls.
Joe-joe
3-Oct-03/11:19 AM
Dreamer,
I just reread the piece..I thought it said.."could walk through walls". It does dramatically change the meaning..but still good.
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