poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on Cancer (Lyric) by Twiggy by Shardik.

Thissitestinks2 Oct 2003

Don't kill me, and just sit there
And fall in love with bad health care
It's too hard to not see them stare
As I gravity bong through my tubed air


What is this? Er..nice close? Maybe try again, I'm sure you'll be writing poetry in no time! I have faith in you! Just keep your head up okay? I know rhyming is hard. ;) *Hugs*