poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on Behind the veil by INTRANSIT.

Caducus1 Oct 2003

add another 4 lines with the same rhyme as the first 2 , end it with 2 non rhyme lines and you have thee a sonnet !

As a poem - deluxe - the last line kind of crackles not explodes apart from that a dine squirt of ink 8