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Life on the Sidewalk (with superfluous vulgarisms) (Sonnet) by ?-Dave_Mysterious-?

Life hurts, Son, My mother advised me, In between puffs on her crack pipe, Life really fucking hurts. I thought my girlfriend understood me, But shit no! She was just another fucking ho, Vending cunt down some scum-ridden bar. In sex there's no fulfilment, The stinking beads of sweat, Running down my erect cock, Provide no anaesthesia. This city is like a weeping sore, It eats away at my very sole, Day after fucking day, Relentless despair is my burden. Last year, my best bud was mown down, In a pointless fucking drive-by, I held up a liquor store to get even, Shit, that's just the way things are around here. I guide the needle in, For a while it will numb my senses, Leaving me oblivious to the torment, Of my shitty everyday life. Fuck it! No one sees the pain inside.

Joe-joe 29-Sep-03/4:06 PM
Yo Dave,

Chill out! You obviously from the berbs! Can't rap with me and Darky, we genuine hoods...know what I'm sayin? Just cause you roamin round the mall with yo pants down to yo knees and yo hat tilted like a homey don't mean you can play dat shit wit us bad ass mother fuckers. You playin wit fire white-boy. Got my back Darky?




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