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Love poem (Free verse) by thavimatola

I flood my heart with memory. Again I see the sight Your moon-bathed hands enfold mine, And grip them as I type. And held in them I write these lines, And twice-reflected light Warms your skin and brights your eyes An incandescent white. While I read this poem, you kiss me. While I edit it, you wait, If I rush it, you forbid me, But it's already too late. So bathe your face for me, Guenevere, Gleam your eyes, and enfold My body in yours, Guenevere, The moon's fled and I'm so cold.

thavimatola 29-Sep-03/11:58 AM
Partial defense: (1) The name has various spellings, depending on language. Oddly enough it was her real name, although the Gaelic root means white/bright. (2) It's a twice reflected light; poet recollects moonlight evening, so the typing need not be moonlit too.




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