This is truly the most agonisingly tacky thing I have ever had the misfortune to read. I have the greatest respect for your feelings, but this is absolute drivel. I refer you to:
http://www.poemranker.com/poem-details.jsp?id=51209
http://www.poemranker.com/poem-details.jsp?id=67061
I wish I could think of a better word, implying more sicklyness than 'saccharine'. But I can't.