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Something I can't explain (Free verse) by milkymilk

Something I can?t explain Something that no science can ever explain When the sky is clear blue and it starts to rain How much we relate with each other, and how we share The enigmatic similarity, this bond is so rare I never thought it would be more than just friends I never perceived past the fogged lens Something that no science can ever explain Like viewing the North Pole and seeing a crane It?s often scary how much we relate Maybe a higher authority has brought us together by fate I never thought I would ever catch your attention I?ve always thought I am just a friend that you mentioned Something that no science can ever explain When a crazy man suddenly becomes sane When our hands reach each other, I get the insight Of heaven where no chaos and it feels so right When you put your head upon my shoulder My heart, my view of life, it gets more warmer Something that no science can ever explain A bum on the street singing with sweet refrain You are always so understanding so modest so pure Your not only my soul mate, you?re my peer We are so much alike and the bond is special, what we have I feel so happy when we make each other laugh When I see you, it alleviates all my pains. Our bond is special and its something I can?t explain.

jacqui 28-Sep-03/9:51 PM
The flow of the poem is very good. i really enjoyed reading it




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