poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on Life's Work by baughworm.

INTRANSIT26 Sep 2003

cumbersome/heavy-redundant, in fact, lose the not started stanza altogether. and I don't like (poor sod) either. i get the geeling you're trying to end this on a positive note. poor sod doesn't fit. put it back on the lift, and adjust accordingly. whv.