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Madam Z - [<~>] - Snake Pen & Holy Grail (Free verse) by SupremeDreamer

-- I AM SNAKE FANGS DROOL LIKE CLOWN lady z judge and moan clown slobbers more serving cuisine drivel my pen bleeds for me you shall never taste the contents of the dreamers lost grail of purple wine or break bread of broken tablet thorn crown and woe roman trumpets sound Madam Z silent banshee voicing disappointment, Dysphoric Clown WILL NEVER kneel humble to repent the fallen saint screamer speaks foul and intent to sow the seed of jester I stand with content, sneer and angst murder and corpse foam leaking from me drafty dome MISERY! MISERY! Pray for me madam z my decayed lips chuckle forever with love.

Bill Z Bub 22-Sep-03/2:59 PM
Like a headbutt from the lead singer of Insane Clown Posse.
It certainly has my attention, but I wouldn't rate it highly.
Yeshua was complex, and the only harness he wore was of humility, if the old tales can be said to have any truth to them.

Take a nice bath. Try epsom salts. Then have some ice cream. With cherry sauce.

As for those decayed lips, you might want to see a doctor.




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