poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on reflexion - dayspring to dusk by DreamerSupreme.

DreamerSupreme18 Sep 2003

well, other than it appearing like kiddie scrawl at the start, whats wrong with it? the label "dreamer" has MANY meanings behind it, and leads to other interesting things.

your four year old niece could say that, sure, but would her saying it serve a purpose in any piece of writing what-so-ever?

what would you suggest?