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I Hate You (Free verse) by mytenderrage

I despise you. You took my heart, And ripped it in to shreds. Until there was nothing left. I detest you. You stabbed my chest Until my blood flowed out Into a puddle of crimson Beneath my aching figure. Until there was a hole Of emptiness within My abused body, Helpless and hopeless, Cold and dead. You had offered me warmth, But I was so na??ve. I believed you. I wanted you. I did not anticipate All this pain All this hurt. You went away With hardly a farewell. How dare you go And leave me all alone? I am so lonely, I need someone. I hate you, I hate you. You hurt me the most When you didn???t mean to. I hate you, I hate you. You left my life forever, With barely a farewell. I hate you, I hate you. I hate you because I love you.

mytenderrage 29-Jul-02/4:14 PM
I wrote this poem because that's how I felt at the time. If it's not original, who the fuck cares. That is how I feel about the situation at the time, and because that every fucking one already wrote poems about that, it is not true, real feelings? I wrote that awhile ago, I am over this person already, but I still posted it because I wanted to. So what if you hated it, it does not mean that I'm a whore (you do not even know me) because of this one poem. If I started writing poetry that you liked, then I would suddenly be "cool" for you, huh? If you didn't like it, don't bitch about it to me, just forget it and don't read it again. And how can feelings be "awful"? All feelings, even hatred or envy or whatever the fuck, are real, even if people try to hide it or forget it or whatnot. I don't understand your logic of this subject. Because I wrote about how I was all mopey and shit after I got dumped (like everyone else, apparently), I am a fucking whore and I have awful, unreal emotions, and that I'm a fucking moron. Do you go around telling everyone else who write about this subject matter that they should go fuck themselves? You probably have a lot of people to write to, huh? Have a wonderful day.




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