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If I Wrote The Perfect Poem (Free verse) by toward
if I could write the perfect poem
paint my dreams with rich colors, in vivid detail
wrench the demons from my darkest recesses
my life and thoughts in eloquent relief
if I could do all this
surely my life would be fixed
peace, satisfaction, and fulfillment would blossom like clover
temptation would wither and return to dust
frustration would melt and evaporate
just writing it down would be enough
just getting it out would make it real
if I wrote of a tropical paradise and blissful love
I would be set there forever more
if I sketched a path forward for those I love
our blessings would be manifest
if I enumerated human weakness
we would be healed
if I could write the perfect poem
maybe everything would be better
in the meantime
I'll keep typing
to amuse myself
and unload some baggage
maybe I'll stumble over perfection on the way
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