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Armageddon (I Am Mr. America) (Free verse) by SupremeDreamer

-- "reject" Thats what you called me as you snickered and sneered convinced that your words were russian nukes turning my world to dust. Dirty commie bastard, I am Mr. America. Didn't the KGB tell you that I have star war satellites with laser guns powerfull enough to evaporate your premature ejaculation? This trailer park persona of mine is dull, and unsophisticated, indeed. -S-O- -W-H-A-T-? My fingers still know how to pull the trigger. And my aim is perfect. So, you see, shooting squirrels all day yields more than just a hillbilly snack. Uncle Sam loves me for it despite the fact that im a rebel who won't take orders. Fuck Armageddon. I'll be sleeping under the pine tree on judgement day.

Joe-joe 12-Sep-03/4:18 PM
Dreamer,

I liked this! Is this guy a private in the army who comes from West Virginia? Best fucking killers are always rebels. They've got the most balls and instinctively know when to strike their prey. Thier a bitch to control and manage, but they get the fucking job done! "You see shooting squirrels......" is a great fucking verse! Nice Job -9-




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