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(limits of ambition) (Free verse) by richa

the clock moves past eleven and none - the last silver hour of water ticks on. the seagulls have fattened with fish, the sea-wall shadows have feigned and failed to outgrow their columns, and this boy has grown so tall as the gravestone of his grandfather, we hope no further.

http://bandgeek 9-Sep-03/9:34 AM
Is this a rewrite, seems like I've seen part of it before. Nice job.




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