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30,000 feet (Free verse) by Patsy

i am unanointed jetting through limbo and only your intersections mark. Your lights, my stars cities: nebulae i am in love with the beauty of your ignorance, i am wishing you could see me hanged not unlike a comdemned toy a strawflower protection against the evil eyes a spector spectator sport.

tadpole 7-Sep-03/9:55 AM
I don't really understand it but part of it I find myself liking. . .what is it all about?




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