richa4 Sep 2003

an adept use of religious language.

'yeast baptized in wine' is a good idea, I think it says people feasting with bread and wine. There is no need for baptized though, the (red) wine of communion is sufficient to make the christ reference. Some of the bigger words seem to impede the flow, so it is best to have no redundancy.

I like 'a carpenter dying on wood' an interesting irony to point out