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The Last Day Of Christ (Free verse) by Mr Pig

Flaxen locks purpled by thorns, Yeast baptized in wine, Laughing soldiers jab their pilum’s, Into scorched feet bloodied by shackles. Christ’s hands cup his face like a challis, Coveting eyes darker than rosary, Holding on to himself, As he falls from faith. Christ devoured by treachery, Drowned in consecration, Consumed by Judas, The intoxicated Eucharist. The hammer blows, Nails thrust, The garish sacrament sighs. Mulled wine blends with sweet dew, On the coarse glades of Gethsemane. A carpenter dying on wood, Uttering his final words to the four winds, As Judas belches from consumption, He is forgiven, Till he hangs, Like a resurrection sunset.

Joe-joe 3-Sep-03/4:00 PM
Mr. Pig,

I really like your work and have much respect for your opinions. This piece is sharp and descriptive but did leave me with some questions (perhaps I look for more than you intend to reveal). In your eyes is the carpenter on the cross a mere mortal or God incarnate? Is Judas' suicide self-driven or the product God's wrath?

P.S. I want to thank you for your kind words, encouragement and well deserved kick in the ass. You were absolutely on the mark in advising me not to abandon this site. Thanks....Joe




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