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The Banishment of Don Quixote (Free verse) by abecedarian

Lance broken windmill shattered a bloody pool of innocence and Don Quixote cleaning his blade - his cleft tongue newly born of a snake's taste for blood Cervantés' head held upright by the only hand that remains true, for the other has just committed an act no author can leave unpunished - its dignity and honor as false as the face of romance is to its nature. There is now only murder as the pen, dragged too deep i' the page in passion destroys all beauty and substance therein a depreciated legacy left forever unmended as Cervantés surrenders his quill to oblivion and stumbles away.

DreamerSupreme 3-Sep-03/10:38 AM
z, i think we need to gather some comrades and smash abes head in. did you see his other poem? the computer mumbo jumbo? isnt that just filled with brilliance? aye? you, me, hatter, 3 people do not fully comprehend his message, we are lazy bastards z.. we are monkeys unable to grasp the mans genius..

he is so full of himself, that he wont discuss anything about his meaning, and im sure its an arrogant "you must figure it out yourself, i have laid it out there for you"

its denial of an extremely ignorant sort. dont you think? am i an arrogant shit who just seeks to ridicule him? am i so evil?

bah.




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