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The Banishment of Don Quixote (Free verse) by abecedarian

Lance broken windmill shattered a bloody pool of innocence and Don Quixote cleaning his blade - his cleft tongue newly born of a snake's taste for blood Cervantés' head held upright by the only hand that remains true, for the other has just committed an act no author can leave unpunished - its dignity and honor as false as the face of romance is to its nature. There is now only murder as the pen, dragged too deep i' the page in passion destroys all beauty and substance therein a depreciated legacy left forever unmended as Cervantés surrenders his quill to oblivion and stumbles away.

<~> 3-Sep-03/9:42 AM
so dq beheads his creator, in order to maintain his own existence?
but if c is beheaded--head held alost by dq--how does he stumble away, unless he's avian? humans tend to drop flat, not stumble once relieved of their head.

is this what you were driving at? ai taking over? if it is, then man, you've got some bends in the road to get us there.




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