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The Banishment of Don Quixote (Free verse) by abecedarian

Lance broken windmill shattered a bloody pool of innocence and Don Quixote cleaning his blade - his cleft tongue newly born of a snake's taste for blood Cervantés' head held upright by the only hand that remains true, for the other has just committed an act no author can leave unpunished - its dignity and honor as false as the face of romance is to its nature. There is now only murder as the pen, dragged too deep i' the page in passion destroys all beauty and substance therein a depreciated legacy left forever unmended as Cervantés surrenders his quill to oblivion and stumbles away.

SupremeDreamer 3-Sep-03/5:50 AM
Your persistent in saying the message is clear.. it isnt. its fuzzy. damn it, i told you! im not alone.

And you must work more intensely if you want your poems to be called "didactic" or worthy of being considered something that teaches. I DEMAND ELBOW GREASE!

Teachers are sposed to make things clear, or atleast get the students to think.

I think writing to teach is not easy to do, because we arent talking about science or math with direct facts, etc. We are talking opinion, metaphysics, philosophy, etc, which do not have direct concrete -FACTS-.. a better goal is to make people THINK, and to write poems with a subtle direction considering what the reader will ponder about.

but thats just my opinion.




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