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Dance With Me (Lyric) by marvelis

The twinkle in your eye. The way that you say bye. All seem to tell me With you I want to be. In a ballroom with a diamond chandelier Your voice in the only music I want to hear. The way in which you gracefully sit. The emotions within me that you heat. As you speak, your legs you will elegantly cross; For the troubles of others you show such remorse. The way that you smile, I know I cannot be in denial. So beautiful in a red dress. The world you seem to caress. With teeth so white And hair pulled back so tight, You seem to be nothing less than a fairytale princess. That's how I used to think of you during recess. You've surpassed Cinderella and Snow White, Touch you those two I'm certain could not. All men, want to love a princess from a fairytale. You, I am sure, are the loveliest one of all to hail. About their accomplishments everyone does rave. But you are the greatest destiny one can ever have. From my chair I now do part And come to you with all my heart. My soul has given me a joyous task; One, that of only you I may ask. Dance with me. For eternity.

William Delacroix 2-Sep-03/6:19 AM
It rhymes, it rhymes hard, but it's a lyric poem so let's not hold that against it. Pretty ending. 9/10.
PS: In your bio there's a verb missing an e.




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