Replying to a comment on:

Ashes to Ashes (Lyric) by Irischer Junge

Ashes to ashes, Dust to dust. Nobody likes to die, But sooner or later we must. Look at our Lord, Our Savior, Jesus. He died on the cross, So He could save us. Have a strong faith, And do good deeds. Then when you die, You'll see that the path still leads Up into Heaven, Through purgatory. And once you're there, You'll see God's full majesty.

electroman1979 1-Sep-03/4:07 PM
i like your poem, but should we aim for purgatory? if we do we surely won't make it, aim for Heaven, i give it an 8 though, better than i can write




Track and Plan your submissions ; Read some Comics ; Get Paid for your Poetry
PoemRanker Copyright © 2001 - 2024 - kaolin fire - All Rights Reserved
All poems Copyright © their respective authors
An internet tradition since June 9, 2001