SupremeDreamer1 Sep 2003
It had quality, you simply gave too much of a shit about readers who suddenly run from a poem that is a bit long..
bad excuse. If its too long, i suggest: tighten the poem to a shorter output, not to make it short, but to strengthen the delivery of the emotion in the poem.
if your really romanitc, you need to put passion into it.. I WANT RESULTS BECAUSE YOUR DAMNED POEM IS WORTH THE EFFORT.
heh.