SupremeDreamer28 Aug 2003

Hrmm.. i like this poem, despite the slightly retarded

"life sucks lets shoot somebody" Philosophy..

But.. i guess im a sucker for it.

Heres some suggestions:

Get out of the cliche, get into the soul
bring me into the universe of hopelessness
hate and revenge, trasport my mind
into the head of the crazed and depraved,
show me the world of men unsaved
and without hope..

with that stated:

I Want to take out everyone

(gerunds are weak use of verbs, dont use them
habitually)

With bullets and this gun.
Crazy, Psychotic is what they called it.
But thats fine with me,
because their dead.

oh well, my opinion.. you can always tell me to go fuck myself and i wont be offended.

lalala.. blessed with 7