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To Mom (Free verse) by Brittanyy

I call you all day but you dont answer the phone, Why is this happening? I feel so alone. You pick up the bottle and take another drink, And a few minutes later you go puke in the sink. You're killing your body You're killing your Mind You cant handle the truth so you drink yourself blind. Throughout the years you've caused me so much pain, Somebody help me Im going insane. I Pick up the knife and walk up the stairs, why shouldn't I do this? Nobody Cares. I sit on the bed and take a deep breath, raise the knife above my head and stab myself in the chest...

Brittanyy 22-Aug-03/6:37 PM
I only wish that you people would be a little more mature..I mean if you really understood anything you wouldnt feel the need to mock my poem but oh well I suppose..Dont leave a comment if you aren't going to vote!




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