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trying to cross the border to Sweetgrass (Free verse) by Patsy

i live in a country of invisible lines, a world where my passing was decided maybe a hundred years ago. You toe these lines with the heel of a billy club the butt of a rifle, your reinforced boot. You dare me to produce. You are smug when you lean on that line, you smile a villain under a fedora under a lampost under a vague grin you may sing for me you may not-you know the routine but not the timing.

richa 21-Aug-03/10:02 AM
Good, quite political I think, but does not descend into a rant because the language is fresh and original.




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