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Upon a falling star (new/changed) (Lyric) by LuckyJoe
And how many times must I wish upon a falling star
Wondering why you've gone so far away
And I'm here wish for another day
Tell me why you've gone so far away
Baby please, there has to be a better way
Come back and hold me for a day.
Tell me now all the things you wish to say.
And how many times must I wish upon a falling star.
Wonder why you've gone so far away
And I'm still stuck, wishing
Wishing for another day and a better way
Baby please tell me you hear all these things I say
Can't keep going on wishing for another day.
And how many times must I wish upon a falling star
Wonder why you've gone so far away
So tell me now, are you gone for good
Baby please don't keep me waiting, come on home to stay.
Cause I can't keep on waiting for another day
Come on home and hold me for the day
Tell me now all the things you wish to say.
And how many times must I wish upon a falling star
Wonder why you've gone so far away
Tell me now are my days wishing just wasting
Can't keep waiting for you to hold me another day
Baby please understand all these things I say
Cause tomorrow I might not be wishing for another day
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Heavy crit please. I've made quite a few changes want to know if it
helped any. Thanks.
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