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eyeh8LIEph (Free verse) by psikosis

So here we are, disguised by fate, brought together by immortal suffering. Wearing a mask of infatuation, saturation between your legs. Manipulation, mastering inferior people, say it's a lie, say it's not true, all of this is because of you. Emotional rollercoaster, spirit is hovering over me, one swift glance at you both, makes me sick. I want to gouge out my eyes, and remove my brain, to get that image out of my body. Erase it from my mental imagery, You say you don't know, maybe you just don't care, I'll unleash it all, I swear.

DreamerSupreme 21-Aug-03/7:45 AM
what the fuck are you babbling about?

"disguised by fate, brought together by immortal
suffering"

ok.. cute.. that really adds a cherry to the whole thing.. and your title is shit.

heres a 3




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