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The Well (Free verse) by Caducus

The well is now dry, Yet the bucket keeps coming, Falling in to darkness. Wishes drowned in silver. Ageing Queens weigh me down. A distant circle of light, But the miry walls keep me trapped, There is a ladder, But I’ve forgotten how to climb. (inspired by Jeremi Handrinos)

Caducus 13-Aug-03/2:46 PM
Thanks,
I like the ages leaders and shimmering coins, yours and mine signify drowning under other peoples wishes in the shape of queens or dead presidents.

I'm sorting myself out now and thanks for the shoulder again.




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