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The Cereal Killer Blues (Lyric) by <{Baba^Yaga}>

In a pea green Fiat I'll save the day While lapping your school with two pints of parfait baby get in, and make it quick Lighting up a Camel, cool zippo flick the side of which plainly states "From the pocket of a killer" You might think you're so 'in crowd' But baby I'm a thriller Cuz I got 29 free ways to kill and a rented rotatiller. * This is my new twelve bar blues song. I would like my friends and peers to finish it for me, and whoever finishes the song the most admirably will share the lyrical rights with me when I record the song this Fall in Venice Beach, California. This is indeed a contest So have fun with it! Lets kill some people! Nuns, politiciancs, Whoever. The next 3 verses are entirely up to the writer's discretion. Yee Haw!

SupremeDreamer 11-Aug-03/11:34 AM
my pockets full of amt vials
thats sure to arouse smiles
as we druggie trip to saturn
ill watch the swirl of colors
frozen in a trance to learn
how to comprehend chaotic visions
of dancin purple men
making wicked incisions
into our skulls to then
suck the liquid out a straw

your soul seduced
pretty lips wide open in awe
as my rough fingers produced
yellow lightin down your creamy thighs
makin those lips breathe dreamy sighs
hopin my exploration discovers
pink tight lips
that'll be sure to make ya buck your hips
leavin you wantin more

depite no erection, dont worry, thats what viagras for
two gulps of rum to send them blue pills down my gullet
and ill ram it hard so you'll feel it

then at 2 am in the mornin,
i ditch the motel we fucked in
to continue explorin
the wonderfull realm of chaos
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Heres my entry.. there, i got balls.. but like i said, i dont write songs lol..






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