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Musings: Willow Sculpture (Free verse) by SupremeDreamer

Oh weeping willow! You cause me to ruminate upon the tears that slide along slender, lachrymose blades, enshrouding your stooped form. My calm examination leaves me to conclude that your legion of keen leaves exist only to sheathe the humiliation of your failure. I consider your timid stance a decrepit show of defiance which makes me think: You are not a weeping willow, but a living statue; the frozen image of opprobrium. ----------------------------------------------------------- This is how I write willow poems luckjoe... enjoy the curse that I just did engrave and burn on your forehead.

SupremeDreamer 10-Aug-03/7:50 PM
yes, your right dark, i can use a dictionary ;) and i dont have a problem admiting it. isnt that one of the points of poetry? to not use the same overused and crappy words that everyone else uses? eh? maybe i should of just used the less "sophisticated" words, and then i would have made a crappy 10 year old's poetry class submission. shut up,ok? im sorry your ego feels small when a 17 year old can do more shit with a dictionary than just sound smart by correcting peoples spelling.




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