poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on Weeping Willow by LuckyJoe.

LuckyJoe9 Aug 2003

If you want to get real technical being a high school drop out doesn’t make you any less intellectual than anyone else. Sure you’re more apt to be of a lower mentality due to that being the reason most dropout. However there are those who were intellectually stimulated enough to be bothered with the simplicity of school. For those the boredom sets in like rigor mortis. Dazing at the wall spacing off dreaming about the freedom outside the prison of school. That’s why I dropped out, went to alternative school and got to set my own pace. Was done within eight months.

Its not that I can’t understand the big words, I do. The whole Mr. Webster thing just complimented the statement above. Complimenting words and phrases, being a poet you should know all about that. Each line is meant to help one another in their quest of becoming a poem. Poetry is what has kept me alive and giving me a fighting edge in this life so it’s became part of my daily life. Being part of daily life means that its heard and shown in my dialect.

Pity me all you want, but know that I don’t need your sympathy or profound ideas made with blind contempt eradicating my life.

Have a nice day and again I thank you for your comments good or bad. Each comment gives me the chance to grow and better myself and my writing.