SupremeDreamer9 Aug 2003

"However at the same time some people need to look at the art in form rather than what they themselves want to see and believe the form should be."


you dont get it do you? It has nothing to do with i think it should be you twit, im talking about HOW you write the damned poem.

Your telling me you cant challenge yourself to do better than just burp cliche filled melodramatic poetic drool? Are you saying that attempting to take your writing to the next level will destroy your "style and mind set"? YOU DONT HAVE A GODDAMNED STYLE KID!!! thats why the stupid "mind set" of the poem is crap, and looks like a poem made by an 8th grade student.

"Not saying any of mine are worth a shit..."

They might be worth a shit if you actually challenged yourself to do better, then maybe you wouldnt have people ripping your shit up into pieces...

stop crying about it and fucking evolve, or shut the fuck up and continue writing the same unartistic crap you've been fartin onto this site, thats ok by me, just dont do this whine routine.