DreamerSupreme7 Aug 2003

misery.. btw, the use of the enter key to perhaps shorten the length for each verse would make it neat, and easier to read, also more comprehendible (if done right)

other than that, its a very good captured emotional image. not sure about the last two lines though.

I think the title sucks.. need a better one.
overall: 8, perhaps a nine with clean up and better title.