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I, Ann Boleyn (Free verse) by http://mulberryfairy

You were Henry the eighth, and I, Ann Boleyn, the radical. You told me to suck your dick, I knew I had no choice but remained vigilant as you placed one sand-papery callused hand (and why so callused?) on the back of my delicate neck propelling yourself deeper with each plunge of my rhythm while I struggled to maintain my four legged poise on slippery silken sheets. I knew you wouldn’t do your own bidding but my neck stiffened warily as you advanced toward orgasm driving my head more coarsely into your musty crotch. I fought to control the insult of my gag reflex wishing only to glimpse your eyes and hand instead of your legs’ bulging varicose veins. How else to be sure of your temper? Suddenly, pulled on top of you you sluiced in, startling the wind out of me with the dazzle of swift penetration. I looked around, disoriented, wondering how we’d migrated from our royal throne of a bed it’s oaken bedposts ornately carved with optimistic, profane images (to aid in the speedy conception of your heir), to this naked mattress on the floor, grayed fan oscillating its humid breeze, curtainless room dusky with streetlight, your hand, callused from unloading trucks still clenching my hip irritable cat eyeing me as I sighed in dismount.

-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 5-Aug-03/8:05 AM
The reign of Henry VIII will always be overshadowed by the Gentlemanly Conduct he so gallantly bestowed upon his ungrateful wives, but what people don't know is that he was actually a pretty good King. You can't really blame him for creating an institution that "fucked religion". I'm fairly sure that the prostitutes were less dogmatic than the catholics, but maybe not. It isn't the church that fucks up religion, or any other form of religious organisation. Religion fucks religion. I know it's awfully trendy to say you don't believe in organised religion but you do have spiritual beliefs (or whatever) but it is the very notion of "religious belief" - believing something without sufficient evidence - that is at the very heart of the "I'll save my best underpants for Sundays" problem. When people start using a book, written thousands of years ago BY MEN, as a basis for the decisions they make, then it is no wonder such people end up thinking and behaving like people did thousands of years ago. No doubt they'll claim it wasn't written BY MEN but by Jesu, through men. But let's face facts: what a complete load of bollocks. You only have to read about a page of Revelations to realise it was probably written by a drugged horse.




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