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A Circle Starts with C (Free verse) by rusty

The precision of a mattress is sleep. Tonight the matress cleaves as you enter. The mattress pretends to sleep as you cleave to the outside of my precision. You shake. I shake it on the mattress, which is not happy because I usually choose the floor. The floor is happy even though it needs refinishing. You get up to leave. I run to the door. The floor is malcontent. You're already halfway down the stairs. I go on stairing one by one, but forget about you once you're out of sight. I run back into my room and trip over my feet hitting my head on the mattress. They both giggle. I throw my phone at the mattress. The floor chuckles. I masturbate and cum on the floor to show it who's boss. The mattress screams, "Touche". I jump up and down on the mattress knocking the phone on the floor and hear the receiver. I forgot to say goodbye. I call you and get your mechanical voice. I say, "How about a quickie tomorrow"? Your line is silent.

richa 3-Aug-03/11:37 AM
This poem is nonsense, good parts but doesn't seem to lead anywhere.

And usually when people talk about masturbation on here, they have run out of ideas and just want to finish the poem with the first thing that comes into their computer geek head

other than that OK




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